The piano could have MUCH more reverb. The snare is a bit too loud and sounds too bright. That background pad could also be much quieter. The supersaws on first drop is WAY too loud. It hurts to listen to and there's so much clipping due to the poor mastering and mixing job, and it's a bummer because I'm sure it's a nice drop. Also the transitions after the drops are almost nonexistent. It makes it kinda confusing and abrupt. Try to avoid spam kicks unless it's a short amount of time on a buildup. Same goes for spam claps, as the claps go on too long on the buildup. The rhythms at the second drop are questionable and weird. The supersaws are even LOUDER here, and it really ruins it. It's WAY too loud. BE SURE TO PUT A LIMITER ON THE MASTER TO AVOID CLIPPING! Otherwise, you'll get that loud and annoying earrape sound. Overall, It's not bad, and I can definitely tell you put a lot of heart and effort into this. However, the mixing and mastering is very poorly done and makes it hard to listen to. Best of luck in your future tracks, and keep up the good work!